fantasy captured

Hey, Hardlove, Awesome poem. It made me kinda sad and appreciate the things I have. To me, this poem gives me kinda the creeps sometimes in a good way. Like ...

Glace woke up two days later, to an empty house. And it was a house she didn't remember going into. She hoisted herself with her elbow and scanned the area. ...

Nice. I like this a lot. It gives me a grey-silver-black colour. To me, also says mysterious to me. Like, when I was reading it, my mind was all silvery ...

Sweet poem. I think it was pretty good. But it had some of it's flaws. Like the stars should of been stars'... But I just see that someone already said ...

I'm new too. Awesome. I really like this poem. It reminds me of like, a bluish-green calm colour. But it kinda reminds me of a sad memory too. But I ...

I like this poem. Since I can't see mistakes very well, I think it was a prettiful poem.

This is beautiful. I loved it. I love everything about this. Awesome poem.

Thanks for your advice. It'll help me. By the way, it was my brother who wrote the reply. Still thanks for your advice. You're pretty cool.

Well I'm not that fluent in typing. So I will miss some keys or type some extra on mistake, okay? I'm sorry. Plus I can write how I want to. ...

this is an awesome poem!

Pretty awesome

Rain fell silently as an young boy, about 14 of age stepped out. He had bright green eyes and light brown hair. He wore only a black t-shirt and jeans. ...